8th Grade
Post your favorite paragraph in this area.
It should contain the following parts:
Title
Introduction
Topic Sentence
Subject Development (2 paragraphs)
Concluding Sentence
*Add a title per each part
Sign the paragraph with your name, grade, section, and a final thought!
How to survive in a camp
ResponderEliminarCamping may not be the best thing to do. But instead of being a negative person, why don’t you pack your bags and follow these steps to survive in 1 of my favorite things:
1. Packing: take only the clothes you need, you won’t bring a dress to the place you will get muddied-up.
2. Eating: do not eat a lot, if you do, while being in another activity your food will come back to the place it was before.
3. Resting and sleeping: rest all the time you can, because at camp, there’s no rest between activities, the onlyrest you get is between 3:00 a.m and 6:00 a.m.
4. Crushes: you may be friends with your roommates and teammates. But also, there will be many people you may crush on or many people who will have a crush on you. So don not make choices on a rush and be friends with him or her.
5. Getting back home: pack everything you packed at home. Remember what stays at camp, may rest in peace at camp.
So, give it a try. There’s nothing wrong on getting out of the routine. Please, TRY IT!
LOL :D
Esmeralda Canahui
OUR WORLD
ResponderEliminarThe world is the place where we live.
It ours we need to take care of it. Our World is divided in: oceans and continents. In order to protect it, we need to follow some simple, but important precautions.
• Recycle:
If we recycle we can save 100 threes in just 1 day which helps keep the Earth and recovered the Atmosphere.
• Carpool:
It has been proving that if we reduce the use of gas the atmosphere can recovered a 10% in just 5 years.
• Electricity:
Simple if you leave a room turns the light off. If you’re not watching TV, turn it off. Turn off everything you aren’t using.
• See? :
By doing little things every day we can help and make the world look better, hope you can do that good look.
Emily Urives
2.3
Survivor
ResponderEliminar• Introduction:
Once in a lifetime in camping day you can get lost.
That was what happened to 5 girls that didn’t follow their mother’s advices.
• Subject Development:
Everything started after lunch. They wanted to explore the forest, but their moms told them not to get too far, but they did!
They started walking all around the forest at night; they heard strange sounds which scared them a lot.
They tried to turn back, but they don’t know how.
A dog found them, and he knew they were lost. He was named as the best forest keeper. He helped them to find their tent.
• Conclusion:
After they were curious about where that dog came from to save them, so they went all around the forest looking for him, but they didn’t find any step. Then, they saw a light in the sky, and they noticed that God was who sent the dog to save them! (:
Maria José Girón de León
9th Grade II
Hi5 and Facebook
ResponderEliminarThe networks can be useful to your social life, but at the same time they can be dangerous to your personal life. If you have hi5 or Fcebook , you have to be careful. That’s why I’m going to give you these steps:
• Don’t add people you don’t know.
• Don’t chat with extrange people.
• Be careful with games and windows that facebook and hi5 has.
With these esteps you are gonin to be more safety .
Fast Food Restaurant
ResponderEliminarIf you are in a Sunday and you don’t want to cook, the best idea is to travel with your family to a fast food restaurant. First, you choose with your family what restaurant you like it most, for example:
MacDonald’s, Burger King, Pizza Hut, etc. Second, you go for the restaurant and you look for the food you prefer. Then, you ask to the casher to
The food you choose of the menu. Next you look for a place where you can eat comfortable with your family.
Then you start eating your delicious and fast food on a Sunday. Finally you enjoy the time with your family eating and talking on a relaxing Sunday.
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ResponderEliminarMy Goals:
ResponderEliminarINTRODUCTION: Everybody has a dream. We all like things and maybe those things will drive you to succeed.
TOPIC SENTENCE: There are so many ways to fail and succeed, would you like to know them?
BODY: The first thing you need to know is that to avoid failure you need positive thoughts. If you have a negative mind failure will come to your way. You have to accept the others opinion and be open mind because sometimes what you like won’t like others and will affect your goals. Giving up is one of the major problems, you have to be very constant.
CONCLUSION: Be always happy with the results, but never stop doing things. Never give up and do always your best.
Isabel Lemus
8th grade 2
Good Luck Charlie
ResponderEliminarPeople like to watch T.V.
There are a lot of programs.
Our favorite ones are: phineas & ferb, Hanna Montana, and Goof luck Charlie. T.V programs have positive and negative aspect. Our favorite one is Good Luck Charlie.
The positive things about this program are:
First, it has a good schedule and we can watch it with our family. It’s the funniest of all series in T.V. It gives you good messages.
The negative things are that sometimes the scenes are repeated and we get bored easily.
Even though there are negative things, Good Luck Charlie is the favorite program of a lot of people.
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ResponderEliminarFOOD
ResponderEliminarIntroduction: A lot of people suffer about fat problems so,
Topic sentence: If you want to be a healthy person follow these tips as follow.
Subject development:
First, Don´t eat too much fast food.
Then, Practice exercise every day.
Third, ask for professional person (nutritionist) how much fats can you eat during the day.
Finally, be aware of the food fats you are eating.
Conclusion:
By following these advices you can become a healthy person.
shirley minera, 8th 2
T.v. programs…
ResponderEliminarIf you want to be entertain and you don’t have anything to do, turn on the T.V. and I’m going to share with you some of my favorite T.V. programs.
Some T.V. programs give us information like Animal Planet. Also they can give us news like Noti7. In addition they entertain us too.
Parents usually like movies for example: HBO. Mothers prefer to see soap operas like Teresa. Teenagers like MTV or E! On the other hand, kids enjoy seeing Disney Channel.
All of these programs usually send a good message, so I recommend you to see them.
Hope you enjoyed all.
María Alejandra Melendez Cuevas 1.2
Movies
ResponderEliminarThere are different types of movies: horror, funny, and extreme movies. With the information below, you can be a good critique.
Have you ever wanted to see a movie, and you don’t know which one to choose? Here are some facts about two movies.
First, the worst movie is Narnia, because it has the worst effects, on the other hand, Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs has better effects and the food looks almost real. Second, in Narnia they are always in war. Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs is very funny. Third, Narnia has no sense, and Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs makes you happy.
In conclusion, here we gave you facts. Now go make a criticism.
ma.rene santa cruz
ResponderEliminarTwilight
ResponderEliminarI like Twilight because is an adventurous, and romantic story with mythological monsters and a lot of imagination.
This is a vampire who fell in love with a human, Bella, but she is in danger because there are a bunch of vampires who want to kill her. The novel is about how he protects and save what he loves best. In the second book, he goes away. There are 4 books on their adventure together as stay together forever. Bella's best friend is called Jacob and in the last book has a baby girl named Renesmee. And all together will make this novel the best.
In the book 2 they get in trouble with the Vulturies, the royal family of vampires, and she has to become a vampire and has to marry him.
In a conclusion it is a novel with a good ending, sense of humor, and good structure.
rebeca melgar 1.2
ResponderEliminarA friend
ResponderEliminarIntroduction
A friend is the one that always is with you in bad and good moments. That doesn’t live you alone in any problem.
Topic sentence
Have you ever asked yourself,do I am a nice friend? Don’t worry about that I am gona tell some advices to be a good friend.
Subject development
• To be a good friend you have be in good or bad times, so you are going to be there to help.
• Don’t leave her alone in any problem she needs some help to solve the problem.
• When she is sad tell her jokes to help her to laugh and forget the problems.
Concluding sentence
Now that I give you these advices you can be a nice friend, that nobody can be without you.
Maria Fernanda Orellana. 8th Grade 3
ResponderEliminarHow to plant a flower
Introduction:
Flowers are important in a garden; they give a colorful view and a special essence to it.
Topic Sentence:
If you want to plant a flower someday, follow these tips to do it better:
Subject Development:
First, you need to find the flower you want and the place in which you are going to plant it.
Next, you dig the sand and make a hole, to do it better you can buy plant`s instruments.
Then, you put the flower inside the hole and after that close it.
Later, you water the flower.
Finally, you have your flower in your garden.
Concluding Sentence:
Now that you know these tips, plant whatever flower you want in your garden.
monica daniel 8th grade 3
ResponderEliminarHow to do a Hamburguer
Will you have a party and you don`t have nothing of food to give? If you follow these steps you can give a delicious hamburguer.
First, you have to take all the ingredients like bread, lettuce, tomato,cheese,and meet.
Second, you toast the bread and cook the meet as you want.
At last put all the ingredients on your bread and if you want you can put it some mayonnaise and ketchup.
As you can see is easy to do delicious food for your party, now your party will be your gratest party in the world.
How to Plant a Flower
ResponderEliminarIntroduction:
Everyone loves spending time in the garden because there are a lot of plants and fresh air.
Topic Sentence:
If you want to know how to plant a flower follow these instructions:
Subject Development:
First, you have to go to a planting area and buy the most beautiful flower.
Next, you have to go to your garden and take all your instruments because they will be very useful.
Third, dig a hole in the ground using a pair of gloves, consequently you would get dirty.
Then, put the seeds or the plant in the hole carefully. Put some water on it, but not to much.
Concluding Sentence:
At the end, you will have a beautiful flower on your garden, and you can enjoy a summer day with it.
Alejandra Rodas
8th grade III
Your class is really nice!
How to do a great 15 party:
ResponderEliminarIntroduction:
When you are just a girl, you would love to make an incredible and a fabulous dream 15 year-old-party.
Topic Sentence:
If you want to have a fabulous 15 year-old-party you need to follow these steps and directions:
Subject Development:
First, you have to buy a beautiful dress, with the dress you will know what color to choose your cake, your invitations and the decoration of your party. In addition, you need to see a beautiful place and a big place to celebrate a big party. Then, (for parents) if you love your daughter, you can buy her a beautiful and expensive new car to have fun with her friends. Next, you will have to go with a makeup artist to see what colors of make up you can use in your party. Also, if you want a companion all night long you have to choose a friend, to be your chamberlain.
Concluding Sentence: Finally, if you follow these steps, you would have the dreamed party you always want to have, and everybody would be jealous of you, and your party.
Melissa Villeda Q.
8th grade 3
monica daniel 8th grade 3
ResponderEliminarHow to do a Hamburguer
Will you have a party and you don`t have nothing of food to give? If you follow these steps you can give a delicious hamburguer.
First, you have to take all the ingredients like bread, lettuce, tomato,cheese,and meet.
Second, you toast the bread and cook the meet as you want.
At last put all the ingredients on your bread and if you want you can put it some mayonnaise and ketchup.
As you can see is easy to do delicious food for your party, now your party will be your gratest party in the world.
MISS LO VOLVI A REPETIR..!!
How to prepare a Party?
ResponderEliminarINTRODUCTION: You can make a party to celebrate something important. You have to be organized when you are planning it.
TOPIC SENTENCE: To prepare a party you have to follow some steps.
BODY:
First, you need to know who you are going to invite.
Then, you need to buy materials like: ingredients for the cake, balloons, the lunch, etc.
Next, you have to look for a place to do the celebration.
Finally, you send the invitations to all your friends.
CONCLUSION: Parties are really funny, but you need a plan to have a great celebration.
ADRIANA COJULUN 1.2
MY COUSIN
ResponderEliminar(Narrative Descriptive)
(Introduction)
Almost everybody have cousins. I have different types of cousins: tall and short, big and small, funny and serious, with good mood and bad mood cousins.
(Topic Sentence)
But if you want to know about an active person, you have to see my little cousin and know some of her facts.
(Subject Development)
Her name is Nathalie Nicole and she is 2 years old. She’s so little and cute, if you don’t know her. But if you know her, she’s like a parrot, she repeats all she listens.
She is similar to her dad; when she wakes up, she doesn’t talk until it passes about 30 minutes. Sometimes she is in bad mood without a reason, and sometimes she is very happy and energetic.
(Conclusion)
In short, living with her is tired, but I love her, anyway.
* Irina Cardona
* 1.2
I really like doing this paragraph because I get to know all my cousins are different but I love them!
HOW TO PREPARE
ResponderEliminarSUSHI
Topic sentence:
If you don’t know how to prepare an easy and delicious snack I have the solution of it. Try to follow each step.
Sentence development:
The ingredients are: slices of bread, cheddar cheese, ham and butter spread. The materials are: a blunt knife, a sharp knife, and a roller (recommended a large one).
First, cut the edge of each slice of bread. Second, join them and with the roller try to make them thin, do it very tight. Next, put butter on each slice of bread with a blunt knife. Then, when you finish take pieces of cheddar cheese and ham and put it on each slice. Finally, try to roll up all slices, do it very tighT, and try to make them to look as a tube. And cut the roll into small pieces.
Conclusion:
Now that you can do this easy and delicious snack you can also share with your friends and family with their favorite drink.
BE POSITIVE EVERY TIME, NEVER GIVE UP
TRY TO DO EVERY THING WITH EFFORT DON’T
DO IT ONLY FOR GET POINTS.
ASHLEY VALDEZ VASQUEZ
1°2
CODE: #19
Jo-natic
ResponderEliminarIntroduction--Topic Sentence: There are some stories about fans of the Jonas Brothers, I`m going to develop them right here.
This girl told me this:
Subject Development: Once upon a time there was a girl who was the biggest fan ever of the Jonas Brothers! (: She loves so much Nick Jonas that she could do anything for him.
One day, she knew that the Jonas Brothers were coming to her town. So immediately she went to the store to buy the tickets for the concert.
End—Concluding Sentence: Finally, she went to the concert, she was the happiest girl ever, she saw Nick Jonas, the most beautiful guy ever. (:
THE END
Ma.Pahola Menèndez
1.1
Code 14
I write this because I really like the Jonas Brothers, specially Nick! <3
I think he is the most beautiful guy ever, ever, EVER! :D
Purses
ResponderEliminar(Introduction)Purses are really important accessories. Ladies use them to carry out their things. (Topic Sentence)In the world different trademarks produce purses. They produce different styles.
(Subject Development)Some tips about choosing you purse style are:
The first tip is that you may choose the occasion to use your purse: parties, formal activities, school, mall, etc. Then you must see if the color of the cloth combines with the purse.
Another tip you must count in is the size of the purse, you can choose the size depending on the place you going to. And in relation to the size, you must see also the size you are. And the last tip is that you must be careful with the things you carry on your purse.
(Concluding Sentence)Remember that purses are not only to carry things we ladies use; they also give you a fashionable look. Use them!
Majo Garzaro
1º1 clue:9
Lizzie:
ResponderEliminarINTRODUCTION: Fashion is a very important aspect in the world today I will teach you how to be a fashion girl.
TOPIC SENTENCE: The world is fashion and fashion is your world. If you want to be a fashion girl, you must follow these tips.
SUBJECT DEVELOPMENTÇ.
First, You should work to have your own money.
Then, You must do a list of your favorite designers.
Later, You should travel to fashion cities like New York or Paris.
Finally, buy the cloth you want and try to combine the same style of cloth so it would be
CONCLUSION:
Now that you know how to be a fashion girl .I hope you apply it.
original.
COMMENT:I write this paragraph because fashion is my pasion and I want to share that with you.
LIZZIE BRITZ 8TH GRADE 1 CODE#4
Persoonaal Thought(:
ResponderEliminarGood Luck everybody on vacation.Thanks for everything. Lovee soooooo muchh aall <3
A Football Fan
ResponderEliminarIntroduction, topic sentence:
Some people are huge football fans and some others like football because of the handsome soccer players.
So here is a short story of a girl I met.
Subject Development:
There was a girl who was a huge football fan, when it was time of the world cup she was so excited and the team she followed was Brazil but the thing was that she likes Kakà.
First, she knew all things about him, and second she was talking about things he does with his family.
Finally, she is always and she will always follow Kakà.
End- Concluding sentence:
As you can see this girl was huge football fan, she knew Kakà and her dream come true.
She loves Kakà! <3
Paula Izquierdo
1.1
Code 10
I decide to write it because I am a very huge fan of football and specialy I love Kakà... so this paragraph is like my life, I hope you enjoy it :)
DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH
ResponderEliminarTITLE
Songbirds…
INTRODUCTION
Songbirds are very special maybe you have already seen one.
TOPIC SENTENCE
There are many reasons to appreciate the songbirds presented here.
SUBJECT DEVEOPMENT
They sing in a very delightful way and are very beautiful. They express feelings when they are singing. Some examples are:
The Cedar Maxwing, which is brown, the Cardinal, which is red, the Western Meadowlack, which id yellow, and the Baltimore Oriole, which is black.
These birds can be found in The United States of America and Canada. They are rarely seen and their photographs are very expensive because of that.
CONCLUSION
Finally, these birds are amazing and if you didn’t appreciate them before you must in the future.
Pamela Azurdia 1.1
PERSONAL THOUGHT
Writing is good and fun!
TITLE
ResponderEliminarAladdin
Narrative Paragraph
INTRODUCTION
I love Aladdin`s movie, so know I will tell you some ideas to watch de movie enjoying it. After
that I`ll count you a short piece of the movie.
TOPIC SENTENCE
Now follow these tips to watch any movie.
First, you need to have a partner to enjoy the movie, laughing with him or her.
Next, you should have popcorns, because maybe there is a part of the movie that would bore you, so just in that case. Or maybe you get hungry.
Then, you should close every door, and every window, and also turn off your cell phones to let the watch the movie with peace.
CONCLUSION
Finally, enjoy your movie!
“Do you want to travel with me, for a while?” Aladdin asked to Jasmin. For his surprise the blue genie exclaimed, “Of course she wants”, and both laugh. Jasmin accept. So, they went to fly on Aladdin`s rug. Jasmin said, “Oh Aladdin! Traveling with you is awesome!” ,and Aladdin felt ashamed.
After, almost an hour, they returned, and the monkey exclaimed, “Why you both didn’t took me?”, and he continue, “You are very bad with me!” Because of that, Jasmine answer him, “Oh, well, we went to travel alone because, we wanted a moment only for us”, and Aladdin replied, “but I promise you, that in the night we`ll travel together.”
Melissa Mazariegos
1ero B. 1
FINAL THOUGHT
Miracles exist, but you need to work on them.
NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH
ResponderEliminarI NEED A WIFE
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INTRODUCCION
One day it was a prince name prince William and his father name Carlos.
TOPIC SENTENCE
One day they were talking and the father tell to William:
SUBJECT DEVELOPMENT
¨You already have 28 years , you have to get marry¨, said Carlos.
Later…
¨Dear town, I have to tell you something¨, said William ¨my father told me that I have to married with someone for be a king, so I want to meet ladies.¨
The next day…
¨Hi! My name is Elizabeth.¨
¨Hi I am William ¨, told William ¨you are so beautiful ¨said William to Carla.
¨Oh! Thanks ¨, told Elizabeth. ¨you too.¨
¨Okay, will you marry with me? ¨ said William
¨Of course¨, Elizabeth said.
CONCLUSION SENTENCE
So they married and live happy, and of course, William will be a king.
PERSONAL THOUGHT
I think that the grammar class is amazing because Miss Celeste support us.
And of my class, we are the best class because we are a really team.
I love my class.
Hope the other year we have the same girls on our class
Gaby Velasquez 1.1
Fast food
ResponderEliminarIntroduction + topic sentence
Fast food restaurants can bring us useful services, not only the delicious food, but also a place to hang with friends and family and its not a serious place.
Subject development
To take advantages to the restaurants we`re going to tell you some aspects of what an fast food restaurant is.
Some positives aspects are:
• You can pay with cash or also with your credit and debit card.
• You don`t have to wait so MUCH the food like other types of restaurants.
• In some of them you can find and express services.
But all the good things have negative things.
• Not all of the fast food is nutritive.
• Sometimes they put high prices so not all of the people is in the economical position for buying this food.
• When there are so many people they don’t give the correct service.
Concluding sentence:
So remember that buying fast food is not to nutritive or maybe is so expensive, but going to a fast food restaurant is a good thing that you can do.
karen paola :)
1.1
I wrtite about this topic because i really like the fast foos wish you like it.
“Friends”
ResponderEliminarIntroduction
A “friend” is one who holds your hand and touches your heart. I think that this is the definition real friendship.
Topic sentence
Now, here are my steps to have a true friend:
Subject development
1. one if you are a new girl in a school you have to be relax and said “good morning” to everybody in the class and the first girl or guy that talks to you is the friend that all your life are going to be with you.
2. When you have a friend you never have to desperate with all your love or things like that.
3. The first thing that you have to say to your friend is “hello pretty friend” and I know that your friend will tell you “oh, you are so pretty and hello friend”. I KNOW THAT THESE WORDS CAN HELP YOU TO BE A GOOD FRIEND.
Conclusion
OK! NOW I wish that these tips that I give you can help you to found a really nice friendship . I wish you the best things in your life.
jessica pellecer!!!
How to plant a flower?
ResponderEliminarHave you ever tried to plant a flower and make the flower live for a while? Or you have never tried to plant one? I will help you.
What can you do with a garden without flowers? (Introduction)
I am going to tell you some secrets to help you, how to make your garden look better. (Topic Sentence)
First you need to clean the place you are going to plant the flower, then you have to buy a bag of soil and seeds.
Wear a pair of gardening gloves and put the soil in the grow and start to make a hole, an finally put a little bit of soil, plant the seeds, when you plant the seeds put a little bit more of soil on top and put some water, a special tip is putting water in the morning and in the night.
(Subject Development)
If you continue planting more plants and taking care of them, you will have a beautiful garden and if you want you can make a gate so like that they will have some protection. (Conclusion)
My thought:
Be positive and happy no matter what is going on!
anDy lai.!!
8th grade 1
Code: 11
Cell phones:
ResponderEliminarIntroduction:
The cell phones are an important invent in the world. It has some advantages and some disadvantages.
Subject development:
You can be in contact with the persons that are so far of us, you always be acquaint of the news, and you can talk with someone when you want, are some advantages of the cell phones.
But something that has advantages always has disadvantages and are that you sometimes you pay attention to your cell phones and you didn’t pay attention to the person that are with you, and now here in Guatemala is so dangerous give your number to strangers.
Concluding sentence:
The cell phones are so useful but you need to have your precautions.
ma.fernanda mejia 1.1
How to make a banana split…!!
ResponderEliminarWhen you have much brewing you must want an ice cream… but you don`t know how to do one and you don`t have enough money to buy one.
Now I will should you the steps to make a great banana split it’s easy and delicious. ;)
First you have to cut one banana in little pieces and put it in a bowl.
Then you have to add vanilla ice cream and another banana
After that you most add the whipped cream and some jam.
Finally put it a cherry and some speckles.
Now that you know how to prepare you must be hungry so enjoy it.
Cinthya Rivara
8th grade I
live your life enjoy it and you will be succesful :D
How to plant a flower?
ResponderEliminarThe flowers are beautiful; you can use it as a decoration sophistically.
To plant a flower you need to follow ties tips:
• You need seed, water, land, a vase and a shovel.
• First put: the land inside the vase.
• Then, with the shovel make a dig in the land.
• Next, put inside the dig put the seed and put a little bit of water.
• Finally, you wait two weeks to the flower grow and enjoy your beautiful flower.
Enjoy your plants and remember to continue planting more plants for oxygen. Remember not logging in oxygen runs out.
Libni Aquino Pérez
8TH GRADE 1
For a friend
ResponderEliminarWhat is a friend to you? For me a friend is all I write right down.
Just for you to remember me:
I`d been thinking why do we met.
Maybe because God knew this will be perfect, maybe because I’d been looking for you, maybe because I need you, maybe because I don`t live without you, but there is going to be millions of reasons, and I can`t stop remember us, `cause all the moments that we lived together are perfect, because you are my dream, my dream became my friend, my friend became my brother, and my brother became my life.
Just to remember what we use to be.
Ana Lucia Chavez 1.1
Do you like the hamburges? Introduction
ResponderEliminarThis is a very easy way to do one! You just have to follow these steps: topic sentence
First you have to have all the ingredients:
Bread
Ketchup
Lettuce
Chesse´
Mayonnaise´´
Meat
Snacks
Then when you have all the materials ready you put first the bread,
Next, the lettuce, third the meat, the chesse, the ketchup, the mayonnaise, and finally the other piece of the bread.
If you want you can accomply it with snacks. Subject development
And in that way you should have a delicious hamburger! (: conclusion
Susan Palma 1st I.
Whatever you believe with feeling becomes your reality
Best and worst movie
ResponderEliminarINTRODUCTION:
There are a lot of movies we can enjoy, and a census that we made revels the best and worst movie.
TOPIC SENTENCE:
The reasons we think these movies are the following:
SUBJECT DEVELOPMENT:
The best movie: Toy Story 3
First, it makes you remember the child you have inside
Next, that you gave to stay together with your family and friends forever, even though what is happening.
Finally, you can enjoy it with all your family because it is not boring.
THE WORST MOVIE: A BITTEN DAD.
First, it does not have sense of humor.
Next, how can a person change his form to a dog?
Finally, adults are not interested in that type of movie.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
Know that you know why they are the best an worst movie, you can choose what movie you will like more, if Toy Story 3 or A Bitten Dad.
By: Hillary Meléndez
8th Grade 3
Code # 10
How to be a Healthy Person?
ResponderEliminarINTRODUCTION:
Have you ever dreamed to be a healthy person?
TOPIC SENTENCE:
Well now you can be one just by following these important directions:
SUBJECT-DEVELOPMENT:
First, if you are one of those persons that can’t live without chocolates and candies try to replace them with fruits like: apples, peaches etc. and vegetables like: carrots, cucumbers, potatoes etc.
Then, do exercise 25 min. every day, which will keep your body strong.
Next, drink a lot of water specially after doing exercise. Drink too milk and natural juices.
Finally, don’t eat things that have a lot of fat, like: pizza, hamburgers, and French fries.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
If you follow these directions be sure you will be a healthy person and your body will be healthy and strong.
Gaby Ayala
8th grade III
COMMENT: I write about this because I think that it is an important topic, which will make people take care of their health.
A Friendly Clown
ResponderEliminarOn one corner of my dresser sits a smiling toy clown on a tiny unicycle--a gift I received last Christmas from a close friend. The clown's short yellow hair, made of yarn, covers its ears but is parted above the eyes. The blue eyes are outlined in black with thin, dark lashes flowing from the brows. It has cherry-red cheeks, nose, and lips, and its broad grin disappears into the wide, white ruffle around its neck. The clown wears a fluffy, two-tone nylon costume. The left side of the outfit is light blue, and the right side is red. The two colors merge in a dark line that runs down the center of the small outfit. Surrounding its ankles and disguising its long black shoes are big pink bows. The white spokes on the wheels of the unicycle gather in the center and expand to the black tire so that the wheel somewhat resembles the inner half of a grapefruit. The clown and unicycle together stand about a foot high. As a cherished gift from my good friend Tran, this colorful figure greets me with a smile every time I enter my room.
How to do a hamburger?
ResponderEliminarDo you like hamburgers? Do you know how to do it? I will give you some ideas of how you can prepare a hamburger
1) You have to prepare your materials like bread, tomatoes, lettuce, meat, cheese, and ketchup
2) First open the bread and put the cheese and a little bit of ketchup
3) Then put the tomato and the lettuce so finally you put the cheese and the bread
So finally enjoy your hamburger with a fresh coca-cola
Feelings
ResponderEliminarIntroduction: Sometimes our emotions and feelings are out of control, and some people think we're crazy or weird. You are tired that all the people told you that?
Topic sentence: I’ll help you with some tips and advice so you can control your feelings:
Subject development:
The first is when you are angry and sad, that's why you are jealous or tired, you have to rest or just take a few minutes to relax, and this is when you are tired. And when you're jealous; get something, like a pillow, and hit or cries and you'll feel better.
The second is when you are happy, very nervous and crazy, that is when you're in love. Don’t worry this is a wonderful feeling, sometimes you feel butterflies in the stomach, sweat a lot, has a lot of cold and say nonsense.
Don’t worry about it: breathe, drink tea, or go happy wherever you want. This is to reassure your crazy feelings.
Concluding sentence:
The feelings are very crazy and now you know how to control them.
Name: Katherine Recinos
Grade: 8TH GRADE
Section: 2
Love them and live with them.
How to make a party
ResponderEliminarYou are bored and you don’t have anything to do you will make a party but no only a party you will make an amazing party!
If you want an amazing party, you just have to follow the following advices.
First, look for a beautiful and bigger place, like Camino real, Barceló etc.
Second, look for amazing DJ for the party, like Blessure, yes etc.
Then, look for a topic you like for decoration like a circus, wonka, thematic etc.
Next, look for delicious snack and alcoholic drinks.
Finally, look for a really fashion dress accessories, shoes, etc.
If you follow these steps you are going to have the biggest party ever!
How Plant a Flower
ResponderEliminar(Main Idea)
If you like plant a flower, feel the land in your fingers and watch plant grow, you need follow these steps.
(Detail #1)
First you need seeds, water, land, air, sun light and of course a base. This are the ingredients.
(Detai#2)
First of all you elect the flower´s seed what else like you.
(Detail#3)
Put the seed in the land, cover up the seed, then water every day. It is important for the seed if is little to grow on a flowerpot, otherwise it can grow on the garden. Leave her in the sunlight and nightly at the shadow, you will grow very well.
(Detail#4)
Conclusion
This is a beautiful experience to germinete to a plant, seeing as you grow, because your you take took care of here.
By Paula Ramirez
code 12
8th grade III
A frenetic Valentine’s Day
ResponderEliminarINTRODUCTION:
For Valentine’s Day, I gave my friend a present, but giving it to her wasn’t as simple as it seems, because a lot of problems showed up that didn’t let me give her the present.
SUBJECT DEVELOPMENT:
Three years ago, I forgot abut Valentine’s Day, s at the morning of that day, I ran to the store to buy a cookie for my best friend. When I was about to pay it, I noticed that I was missing 1 dollar. I ran t my house to take the dollar, but for me t come faster, I took the bicycle. By the way, I collided with a tree and my bicycle got broken! I couldn’t leave my bicycle there, so I held it and took it back to my home. I left it quickly in my backyard, and returned again walking to the store. When I arrived, very tired, I noticed that I had left the dollar on my bicycle basket I had to come back to my home, but this time, I used one of my dollars to drive me on a bus. When I arrived home, I had to take two dollars, cause I had used one for the bus. I returned again, but this time I looked carefully if I had all the money I needed. When I arrived to the store, they told me that the last cookie was already sold, so I had to buy a chocolate, which was cheaper, so I wouldn’t have needed the other dollar, for the one I had lots of problems.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
The present of my friend was a melted chocolate, but it would be very long if I explain you how it melted. This was my story about a very frenetic valentine’s day.
Diana Barrios
8th grade 2
code: 2
Love:
ResponderEliminarLove is an emotion of strong affection and personal attachment.Love is a virtue representing all of human kindness,compassion,and affection.Love may also be described as actions towards other based on compassion,or as actions toward others based affections.
Love in its various forms acts as a major facilitator of interpresonal relationships and, owing to its central psychological importance,is one of the most common themes in the creatives arts.
Cindy Pamela Fabian Molina
8th grade 2
Code# 07