sábado, 2 de octubre de 2010

My favorite Essay!

9th Grade
Post your favorite paragraph in this area.

It should contain the following parts:
Type of paragraph (narrative, descriptive, How-to paragraph, or Comparison and Contrast)
Title
Introduction
Topic Sentence
Subject Development (2 paragraphs)
Concluding Sentence

*Add a title per each part

Sign the paragraph with your name, grade, section, and a final thought!

36 comentarios:

  1. Dream Vacations

    After long weeks of hard work, everyone needs some vacations. But, who can you have a perfect vacations?
    Well let me help you by showing you the steps for having dream vacations.

    First, you have to choose a place where you can relax, for example the beach, one of the most relax places and to have fun on it. It is a beautiful beach with blue water and white sand. This beach is a perfect place where you can do surfing sport and a lot of more activities.

    Next, you have to choose a friend with whom you can share your moment of fun with. A friend on vacations let you have more fun.

    Finally, to have a perfect vacation, you have to forget about everything that stresses you out, and enjoy every second of your vacations.

    Everything has its own time; but when it’s vacations time, give yourself a breaf and laugh out loud.


    By: Cecilia EStrada
    9th Grade 3.

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  2. KFC & POLLO CAMPERO

    If one day you are in your house wanting chicken, but you only have steak, what would you do? Well, here we give you some options.
    KFC is an American restaurant that sells only chicken. Although there are only two in Guatemala, you can recognize them by their icon, which is a man.
    In the other hand, Pollo Campero is a G uatemalan restaurant which has a menu with a lot of variety. There are a lot of Pollo Campero’s all over the country and you can easily recognize them by their famous icon, the chicken.
    KFC and Pollo Campero have a lot of differences, but they also have things in common. For example: they sell chicken, have good service, and have a play zone for children.
    These restaurants sell delicious food, but some of them are not healthy at all. Fast-food is good once in a while, but remember to eat vegetables and fruits in order to have a good life.

    Sara Ximena Lòpez M.
    9th. grade III
    Grammar is an amazing class.

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  3. What Environment Means To you
    (Descriptive Paragraph)

    *Introduction:
    Topic Sentence: According to the dictionary, environment is everything that surrounds us, but What does it mean to you?

    *Subject Development:
    Maybe when you think about “Environment” you think of ecology, or even about a social environment like friends or family and both ideas are right. Now, How do you take care of it? Perhaps, you don’t contribute to Earth’s pollution or you just take care of the people around you; you should always be connected to your idea of
    “Environment”.

    *Concluding Paragraph:
    So remember, it doesn’t matter what your idea of “environment “is, you should never forget about everything that is around you and you should be just thankful for those things that make Earth a home for you to live in.


    Gina Zanuncini
    9.3


    *Final Thought: " Modern technology
    Owes ecology
    An apology.
    ~Alan M. Eddison"

    I liked this year because I discovered new things in the grammar and writing area. Now, Im sure I know how to write different types of paragraphs correctly.
    Im thankful with Miss Celeste because I know she spent a lot of time preparing her classes.We Will Miss you!

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  4. How to Make a Delicious Hamburger
    (How-to-Paragraph)

    (Introduction :) Are you hungry? Do you want to eat something really, REALLY good? Try a hamburger! (Topic Sentence :) This procedure will show you how to make a delicious hamburger.

    (Subject Development: )First, gather all the ingredients you will need; for example: bread, meat, tomatoes, lettuce, mustard, ketchup, and mayonnaise.

    Then, put all of the ingredients together into the two slices of bread.

    Finally…ENJOY!

    (Conclusion: )Making a hamburger is very easy. Now you can make yourself one anytime you want.

    By: Deborah Dominguez. 9.III

    -Final Thought: Yesterday is history, tommorrow will be mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it PRESENT.
    I learned a lot of useful topics in the Grammar and Writing class. I will miss Ms. Celeste next year. :(

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  5. INTRODUCTION:

    My mother has a lot of things to do everyday. She helps us in many things and helps other people.


    Topic sentence:
    Until my mother wakes up she starts to make her day nice.

    Body:

    My mother:
    My mother’s name is Jessenia Bran, she’s 36 years old. Until she wakes up she starts making her day nice.
    Her daily activities are: She wakes up in the morning at 5:30 pm. She prepares my sister’s and me breakfasts.
    Then, she fixes herself to look nice.
    She takes us to the school, and then, she goes to the gym. When I came of school, she takes a lunch with us, and helps my sister doing homeworks.
    Next, she takes me to the gym. In Thursdays, she goes to a cooking course. In the night, she takes a bath, she watches TV and finally she falls asleep.

    Conclusion:
    My mom is a very important person. She tries to do her best every day.
    from katherine stuhlhofer and cindy mejicanos

    9th Grade 3.

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  7. How to paragraph
    How to plant a flower
    Introduction
    Your garden, a place where your kids can play and make your house look beautiful!
    Topic Sentence:
    Have you ever wanted to do your own garden as tinkerbell, I will show you some tips that can help you.
    Subject development:
    1. You need a place, where you want to plant your flower and the type of flower you want.
    2. Put the seed on the ground, covered, and put wáter. The other thing is to plant the flower already big.
    3. Be careful, because they are delicate with the sun. They can be beautiful or get smaller and uncolored.
    Conclusion:
    Talk to your flowes, put wáter to them, and make them look beautiful as they are!

    Ana Gabriela Sanabria Leiva
    8th. II

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  8. How-to-plant-a flower

    Introduction: Don’t you think that your garden is sad? If you do, the solution is plant flowers! Topic Sentence: Here are some steps…

    Body: First of all, choose the flower you like the most.

    Then, make a hole in the soil of the flower pot you chose.

    Place the flower inside and add some water to it.

    Next, you need to take care of it, add some water each day depending on the type of flower you are planting.

    Conclusion: Now you can be satisfied and happy because your garden is going to be colorful and pretty. And also you got a new hobby!

    Thanks! (:


    How-to-Paragraph
    Ximena Chavarrìa
    9th. Grade

    I think that this activity was funny and interesting, because not a lot of teachers let us do this, and it include using technology. Also was good to get out of the routine.

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  9. How to bake a cake:

    Introduction: Cakes are delicious desserts, they are useful for every kind of occasion, like birthdays or baby showers, Topic sentence: so these are the steps to prepare a cake:
    Body: First, you need to gather all the ingredients in a bowl; put the flour, the eggs, the milk, the butter, and your favorite flavor syrup.
    Then, you have to mix all the ingredients with a spoon or with an electric spoon.
    Next, put the mix in a mold and put it on the oven for at least 30 minutes.
    Later, you take the cake out of the oven and you put frosty on it.
    Finally, you can put decorations on it and…. to eat your cake!!
    Conclusion: So those were the simple steps for you to bake a cake for your especial occasion.

    How-to paragraph
    Regina Herrera
    9th grade 2
    I think that all these kind of activities make us learn a lot about how to write all the kinds of paragraphs.

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  10. How to Put Yourself Acrylic Nails
    How-to Paragraph

    Introduction
    Girls like to be always beautiful from head to toes. One part that most of us don’t know how to embellish is our nails. Some way for them to be elegant and beautiful id by putting on acrylic nails.

    Topic Sentence
    To embellish you nails with this procedure you can follow these steps.

    Subject Development
    First, you need to clean your nails and cut them right to the tip of the finger, be sure the cuticle is pushed back. Then, smooth the top of your nails.
    Later, choose the tips that fit perfectly the size of each of your nails. If they don’t, you can smooth them to make them fit. Having all your tips ready, start pasting them. Then, with the special cutter, cut the tips at the size you want them and smooth them to make the perfect shape.
    Then, smooth on the top of the tip and nail to make the surface even. Choose the acrylic you want your nails to have, cover the whole nail and tip. Repeat this step as many times as needed, at least three times.
    Forward, smooth again the surface and be sure no wrinkle is left. At last, put your nail polish on and leave it dry.

    Conclusion
    Now, you can realize that this is an easy and entertaining way to embellish you nails.

    By Sharlyn Dubón
    9th grade II

    "Writing is the best way to talk without being interrupted."

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  11. I think flowers can do everything, since giving you air, making you smile, help to get in love to apologize! :)

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  12. “Cakes”

    1. Introduction:
    When we think about a special occasion, we think on a special cake for it, like in birth days, weddings, fifteen parties, and so on. We need to know, which type of cake to choose for each occasion.
    2. Topic Sentence:
    You can follow these tips for choosing your perfect cake.

    3. Subject Development:
    • Fifteen Parties:
    For this occasion your cake has to be perfectly decorated, according to the theme, the color of the dress, or things according to the party.

    • Wedding day party:
    For this occasion you need a perfectly decorated cake, according to what the couple wants, it has to be white with a supporting color, and according to the theme the party has, if it has.

    4. Conclusion:
    Like these, there are lots of ways, of how you can do your cake, only remember it has to be just perfect.

    Lucía Gabriela Azurdia Flores
    9th. Grade II

    I think that these activities are very useful, because we learn a lot doing these things.

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  13. Fifteen year parties

    Introduction:
    •Topic sentence:
    When you are a teenager, 15-year-old parties are one of the most important things in our lives because you only live it once.
    Controlling ideas:
    In order you have an amazing party, you have to organize it very well. So, here there are some tips for it.
    Subject development:
    First, you have to organize your ideas. Then, choose a theme of your own. Later, look for a place and decoration and you are also able to look for details. After, make a list of guests and invitations. Then, look for the dress you like the most, and finally be ready and beautiful for the big day.
    Concluding sentence:
    If you feel confident be sure everything would be perfect as you planned it before and you will have the best party of the year.

     Krista Orellana
     9th. Grade 2

    Writing is just another way to express things you heart can’t say...

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  14. Survivor

    • Introduction:
    Once in a lifetime in camping day you can get lost.
    That was what happened to 5 girls that didn’t follow their mother’s advices.

    • Subject Development:
    Everything started after lunch. They wanted to explore the forest, but their moms told them not to get too far, but they did!
    They started walking all around the forest at night; they heard strange sounds which scared them a lot.
    They tried to turn back, but they don’t know how.
    A dog found them, and he knew they were lost. He was named as the best forest keeper. He helped them to find their tent.

    • Conclusion:
    After they were curious about where that dog came from to save them, so they went all around the forest looking for him, but they didn’t find any step. Then, they saw a light in the sky, and they noticed that God was who sent the dog to save them! (:

    Maria José Girón de León
    9th Grade II

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  15. 15
    Introduction
    When you are a teenager, is a 15-year-old party seems to be one of the most important things in our lives because you only live it once.

    Topic Sentence:
    In order you have an amazing party, you have to be organized very well.
    So here are some tips for it.

    Subject Development:
    º First, you have to organize your ideas.
    ºThen, choose a theme
    º After that, look for a place and decoration and details that are very important are care about that.
    ºNext, make a list of guests and invitations.
    ºFinally, be ready and pretty or the nice and big day 15 year party.

    Conclusion:
    If you feel confident, be sure everything will be perfect as you planned before, and you will have the best party of the year.

    Diana Escobar
    2.2

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  16. Our Dream Car
    Descriptive Paragraph
    Introduction
    Teenager would like to get a car for their 16 years-old birthday party; but (Topic Sentence) they look for certain trendy (controlling idea) characteristics, to become popular among their friends.
    Subject development
    As we all know, boys have different likes than girls, they look for swift and mammoth cars, in contrast, girls prefer stylish, trendy, safe, and comfortable vehicles. Boys love giant cars, while girls look for the glamour in small autos.
    As everyone would love to have a nice car, including boys and girls, the brands are also classified for each group.
    BMW, Mercedes Benz, Audi and Range Rover are several brands frequently seen in the streets and roads used by the female society in colors similar to white, black, red or even purple, colors that would definitely would make you look more feminine, while male teenagers prefer Volvo, Ferrari, Eclipse, Hummer, Honda, etc., in colors as coffee, blue, green, yellow, and on occasion black or gray.
    Conclusion
    So now, you know that, every teenager would like to receive a car from their parents for their 16 years-old birthday party, but there are differences between male and feminine like, according to styles including brands, colors, and even sizes of how teenagers would like their dream car.



    María José López Ayala
    Ninth Grade 2
    Code # 13

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  18. compare and contrast

    Most of the teenagers love World wide web pages . There are a million of it, but they prefer one in specific Facebook there are some reasons about why they prefer it
    Differences
    Hi5
    It doesn’t have a good chat
    It has many colors
    It less popular
    Facebook
    It has 2 colors
    Teenagers love it
    More popular
    Similarities
    They have www. Pages
    They can share videos
    They can share photos
    So as teenager I approve them. So enjoy internet & have fun!!!

    Alejandrina Garcia Marroquin !
    segundo basico 1
    clave 10

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  19. Volleyball

    There are many sports, but the best sport is volleyball. I have being playing volleyball since I am 8 years old. If you want to know about this sport I will tell you information about it:

    There are many places where you can do volleyball. One example can be de Federation of volleyball.
    You need to have all the equipment to play.
    You have to be healthy and in good shape.

    Volleyball is the perfect sport. You can travel around the world representing the federation. You will love playing this sport.

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  20. How-to Paragraph

    Title:
    How to plant a flower

    INTRODUCTION:
    If you want to give a flower to your mom, you can plant a flower for her. If you don’t know how to plant, follow these steps:

    STEP 1
    First, you need to buy the following materials: seeds, soil, water and a pot.

    STEP 2
    Then, you fill the pot with soil and put the seeds you want.

    STEP 3
    Then, you fill it with water and put it in some place where the sun gives it light.

    STEP 4
    Finally, your flower will start to grow. You have to spray it with water every day.

    CONCLUSION
    Now you have the perfect gift for your mother. As you can see, it is easy to plant it.


    Amy Ruiz
    9.th Grade 1
    You are the best teacher.

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  21. Fast food restaurants ( Comparison and Contrast paragraph)
    Introduction:
    People actually prefer to eat on weekend in fast food restaurants, because maybe they don´t like to cook.
    Teenagers and kids prefer to eat in fast food restaurants, because almost all of them sell French fries, hamburgers, tacos, pizza, chicken, etc.
    Topic Sentence: People may like or dislike things of the following restaurants:
    Subject development:
    Pollo Campero:
    • It doesn´t have clean bathrooms.
    • Sometimes the chicken is not well cooked.
    • The French fries and the chicken have a lot of fats.
    • The restaurants are big and they have a lot of tables.
    • The restaurants have good games for kids.
    Taco Bell:
    • Teenagers like a lot this restaurant.
    • It offers a lot variety of tacos.
    • The bathrooms are clean.
    • The service is very good.
    • Almost all the people love their French fries.
    • The restaurants are very big and they offer “refill”.
    Conclusion:
    Actually there are a lot of fast food restaurants like Pollo Campero, Taco Bell, Mc Donald´s, Pizza Hut, etc.
    Some fast food restaurants are very cheap and when a person is in the street, it is easier to eat fast food than to go to their house, to prepare something and to eat.
    Fast food restaurants give several benefits to people, but this food give health problems too.
    Alejandra María Alvarez López.
    9th grade I.
    Miss Celeste: you are a very good teacher, thank you for everything you taught me during all the year.

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  22. Cesia dijo...
    Descriptive Paragraph
    Cesia Perez
    2.1



    My Autobiography

    Introduction:
    • Hi! My name is Cesia Perez Escobedo, I’m 15 years old. I born in Quetzaltenango Guatemala the 12 of July of 1995.
    My mom is Dennise Escobedo Velarde, my dad is Raul Perez and my sister is Hilda Maria Perez Escobedo.

    Subject Development:
    My kindergarden was in “El Valle De Occidente”, then my elementary was in “Colegio Campo Alto” and the beginning of my high-school at “Liceo Secretarial Bilingue”

    Right now I’m in 8th grade 1, I really want to tell you about my class. They are the best, they have a lot of “flow” they are different and that’s why they are special. They make every of my days in school the new best day of my life.

    I have 4 “Besties” they are always there for me and actually they know I’m always gonna be beside them. Her names are Alejandrina, Andrea, Tephie, and Liza. I love them so much.
    And of course I have 3 best friends boys.! Gian Karlo, Andreas & Jose David. They are always there for me helping and making me laugh.! I actually REALLY love them :D

    I’m totally in love with science class. It’s my favorite topic, and it is very interesting for me.
    I like to play football, tennis and squash. Those are my 3 favorites activities.
    Every Weekend, Saturday and Sunday, I go to “Casa de Dios” I really have fun there. It’s my favorite place to stay. They are like my third family.

    Conclusion:
    Every person in my life is very important,I’m very thankful for them. They are a great gift from heaven. I born in a perfect country with the right kind of people. :D

    Hope you like it..!!

    w/♥
    Cesia :D

    Get up, stand up, Stand up for your rights. Get up, stand up, Don't give up the fight.
    -Bob Marleey ♥

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  23. Narrative paragraph

    Title:
    The Best Gift

    Introduction:
    Sally’s birthday was today, unfortunately Sara her best friend forgot it. She feels very bad because she didn’t have anything to give her.

    Subject development:
    Suddenly she remembered that, her mom send him a bag with the most delicious cookies you could find in the town.
    So she made a beautiful card and packed the cookies in a small funny bag.
    When sally arrived at school all her friends congrat her and give her a lot of cards and presents.
    Sara’s present was the last one, when she opened the small bag she quickly taste one of the cookies and instantly love them.

    Concluding sentence:
    Sara’s gift was the favorite and delicious present of all. now she remember her best friends birthday always.

    Pamela Sofia Vasquez Rodriguez
    9th. Grade 1

    I love your class; you are a very good teacher, never change.

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  24. Mónica Alejandra Oliva Sierra
    2.1
    Code: 14
    Comparative Paragraph


    Now a day’s laptops and computers are more useful for people. If you want to know the difference between computers and Laptops here are some examples:

    • Laptops

    1. Are Portable.
    2. Are in different types and colors.
    3. Are smaller.

    • Computers

    1. Are bigger.
    2. Has more memory.
    3. They need to be on a desk.


    Some persons like more laptops and some other like more computers, the 2 of they have pros and conts. But you can choose the best one for you.

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  25. Becoming beautiful
    Introduction: I will share my favorite story, so I will tell you the story in the following paragraph.
    Subject development
    Once upon a time, Hugo decides to go camping to the forest. When he got there he felt alone, so he went to look for his friends.
    On his way, he saw 3 creatures, they were horrible, and they were chasing him.
    That monsters felt bad because all the people were afraid of them, so they decide to go with the magic butterfly, so in that way she could transform them into 3 nice and sweet girls.
    After that, Hugo and the girls played together.

    Conclusion
    Now you know why becoming beautiful is my favorite story.

    Emmy Annelie Lira
    segundo uno
    clave 12

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  26. How to Plant a Flower

    INTRODUCTION
    Women are more interested in flowers because is a way to distract from many things and all that colors that they have look like a colorful as a rainbow .and they are a good decoration to make your garden look beautiful.



    TOPIC SENTENCES:

    If you want a beautiful way to see your garden full of flowers follow these steps:

    SUBJECT DEVELOPMENT:

    STEP #1: First, buy seeds and plant it in good way.
    STEP #2: To water the flower all the days in the afternoon.
    STEP #3: They will start to grow slowly but beauty.
    STEP #4: Later cut the death leaves so the flower will live a lot.
    STEP #5: To have a lot take care of it and your garden will live a lot.


    CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
    Here are some special steps to follow so you can have a beauty garden full of flowers and too is a good way to guide you so you can’t lose any detail.

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  27. Diana alejandra (gemela)5 de octubre de 2010 a las 16:01

    How to plant a flower When you want to plant a flower you have to follow these steps. Firstto open the hole, How to insert de seeds, How to close the hole When you start to plant a flower you have look a place that the plantresave sun then you have to open a hole in the earth, when you havethe hole you put a three seeds in the hole, then clause the hole andthen put liter water in the hole and have to wait to grow and youdon’t forget to put water every day. When you protect your flower you have a nice flower and you tell ofyour friend what you do to have a beautiful flower.

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  28. 15 year parties

    Introduction
    When you are a teenager, 15 year-old-parties are one of the most important things we care about; because that age you only lived it once.
    Topic sentence
    In order you have an amazing party, you need to organize it very well so: Controlling Idea

    Sentence Development
    First you need to choose a theme.
    Look for a place and decorations according to the theme or color of your dress.
    Look for the dress and shoes you like the most.
    Make a list of guests so you can start making the invitations.
    You also need to look for a disco and make a list of songs.
    Make dress, makeup and hair tests.
    Practice the Vals, which is something important.
    If you want make photo shoot so you will have great memories of that day.
    Finally be prepare for that special day and just enjoy it!
    Concluding Sentence
    Be sure everything is going to be perfect as you planned it before; just enjoy it because that day you only live it once!

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  29. Introduction
    When you are a teenager, 15 year-old-parties are one of the most important things we care about; because that age you only lived it once.
    Topic sentence
    In order you have an amazing party, you need to organize it very well so here are some helpful tips:

    Sentence Development
    First you need to choose a theme.
    Look for a place and decorations according to the theme or color of your dress.
    Look for the dress and shoes you like the most.
    Make a list of guests so you can start making the invitations.
    You also need to look for a disco and make a list of songs.
    Make dress, makeup and hair tests.
    Practice the Vals, which is something important.
    If you want make photo shoot so you will have great memories of that day.
    Finally be prepare for that special day and just enjoy it!
    Concluding Sentence
    Be sure everything is going to be perfect as you planned it before; just enjoy it because that day you only live it once!

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  30. Diana Sophia Figueroa Felipe
    9th grade 3
    If one day you are in your house wanting chicken, but you only have steak, what would you do? Well, here we give you some options.
    KFC is an American restaurant that sells only chicken. Although there are only 2 in Guatemala, you can recognize them icon, which is aman.
    In the other hand, pollo camper is a Guatemalan restaurant which has a menu with a lot of variety. There are a lot of pollo camper’s all over the country and you can easily recognize them by their famous icon, the chicken KFC and pollo camper have a lot of differences, but they also have things in common. For example; they sell chicken, have good service, and have a play zone for children.
    These restaurants sell delicious food, but some of them are not healthy at all, fast – food is good once in a while, but remember to eat vegetable and fruits in order to have a good life.

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  31. How-to paragraph

    How to prepare a hamburger


    Introduction:

    Everybody has eaten at least one hamburger during their life, but do you know how to prepare one? (topic sentence) This is the procedure (controlling idea) you should follow to prepare a delicious hamburger.

    Subject development

    First, you have to buy or take out all the ingredients: bread, meat, tomato, lettuce, cheese, ketchup, mayonnaise, mustard, pickles, etc. Ingredients will vary according to your likes.

    Next, you have to toast the bread (with the cheese if you want), disinfect the lettuce and tomato and cut them into slices. Finally prepare your hamburger y adding he lettuce, pickles, tomato, and meat to the bread. Remember to add the ketchup, mayonnaise, and mustard.

    Conclusion

    And you have a delicious hamburger! Preparing a hamburger is easy but you have to do everything well in order to have a delicious hamburger. Now try to make hamburgers for your whole family!



    Ma.Lucía Valenzuela
    9.2



    Honesty is the first chapter in the book of wisdom.
    Thomas Jefferson

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  32. My trip to Orlando

    Narrative Paragraph:

    Introduction:

    This description is about one of my favorite trips. All my family had very good times and we treasure a lot of amazing memories.

    Subject development:

    Two years ago, I went to Orlando with my family. We were all very excited and happy to spend some time together as a family.
    The funniest part of our trip that I can remember clearly was when we were arriving to a train on the airport to get to the cars’ rent.

    We were all running to catch the train that will get us to the place where we will rent the car. I was walking with my dad and my sister was walking with my mom.

    My mom was walking a little slowly and we were very fast. So when the train arrived at the station my dad and I get in very quickly and my mom enter when the train was closing its doors, so she get the half of her body in and the other half out. It was very funny. Then she could enter completely with some people’s help.

    Conclusion Paragraph:

    After all happened, we were all laughing and enjoying our trip. At the end we had a very good time at the trip and my mom learn to walk faster in airports.

    Ana Sofía Del Valle
    9th. Grade III

    If life gives you a 100 reasons to cry, show life you have a 1000 reasons to smile.

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  33. maria andre salazar
    how-to paragraph

    how to prepare a hamburguer
    Hamburger writing

    • Main idea:
    To prepare a delicious hamburger you can follow this steps.

    • Detail#1:
    First putt he bread in a plate and a piece of meet in the hamburguer.

    • Detail#2:
    Then, putt he lettuce over the meet then put a piece of cheese.

    • Detail#3:
    Then, putt he tomatoe and if you want onion, kétchup etc..

    • Closing sentence:
    This is an easy way to prepare a delicious hamburger for your lunch.

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  34. How- to Paragraph

    Instruction
    Topic sentence
    If you want to choose the best gift you can follow these tips:

    Tip 1: you have to know what person likes to choose the best gift that he or she will like.
    Tip 2: you can ask questions to her mother or sister what can be the perfect gift that he or she can use.
    Tip 3: when you all ready have the best gift you can rapping with a beautiful paper with an especial card.
    Concluding Sentence
    If you follow these tips you can choose the Best Gift for that especial person for you.

    By Stefany Barco
    9th Grade 3.
    This is a nice activity a like it.

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  35. How-to paragraph

    Topic sentence:
    If you want to plant a flower you can follow these steps:

    Detail 1:First you need to open a hole in the ground.
    Detail 2:Then you put the seed into the hole.
    Detail 3:After having the seed in the hole you have tu close the hole. take a little water and put it in the hole.
    Detail 4:And your plant grows up better can you add a little fertilizer.

    concluding sentence:
    Now that you know how to plant a flower, you can plant flowers in your garden to make it look better.

    Andrea Soto
    9Th.Grade 1.

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  36. Title
    How to Bake a Cake
    Introduction
    Everyone loves cookies, candy, chocolate and cakes, but we dont know how to cook them, so if you want to bake a delicious cake, you need to follow some steps.
    Subject Development
    First, you need to buy the following ingredients:
    Ingredients:
    3 eggs
    cups of water
    1 box of cake mix (any kind)
    1/3 cup of cooking oil
    1 baking pan
    1 mixing bowl
    Mixer (or by hand)
    Cake toppings (any kind)
    Measuring spoons and cups

    Then, you take your mixing bowl, open the box of cake mix and pour it in the mixing bowl. Take the three eggs, crack them and put them in the mixing bowl. Take the cups of water and put them in the mixing bowl .After that take the 1/3 cups of cooking oil and put them in the mixing bowl also.
    Next, Mix with mixer (or by hand), Pour the mix in the pan, after greased .Put the pan in the oven on 350 for 25 - 30. After baked let it cool off for at LEAST 10 MIN.
    Finally, After it cools down you may decorate with any cake decorations.
    Concluding Sentence
    It is very easy to bake a cake, know try to cook other recepies that you like.
    María Fernanda Mejía Vivar
    9th Grade 3
    Key : 12
    Grammar is an easy and nice class.

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